Comments on: sixty|four http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/ Wed, 01 Feb 2012 23:23:13 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Ramón http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-17313 Ramón Thu, 09 Dec 2010 23:15:35 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-17313 hey cj, i am a novice writer and much of what you see here online is what i consider the first draft of kukuburi. i whole heartedly welcome intelligent comments and criticism. that said i am in total agreement with you and shagbark - this sequence screams at me now and when i go to revise kukuburi for print i will most likely remove all dialogue here or re-edit the sequence entirely. it's a learning process... and one i'm in the middle of and all of you are witness to. i want to make kuku the best experience i can, so i thank you for your input and comments, all will be taken into consideration when i collect the story for print. cheers :) hey cj,

i am a novice writer and much of what you see here online is what i consider the first draft of kukuburi. i whole heartedly welcome intelligent comments and criticism. that said i am in total agreement with you and shagbark – this sequence screams at me now and when i go to revise kukuburi for print i will most likely remove all dialogue here or re-edit the sequence entirely. it’s a learning process… and one i’m in the middle of and all of you are witness to. i want to make kuku the best experience i can, so i thank you for your input and comments, all will be taken into consideration when i collect the story for print.

cheers :)

]]> By: CJ http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-17311 CJ Thu, 09 Dec 2010 23:03:38 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-17311 I'm totally with shagbark on this one. I started reading this comic maybe almost a year ago now, and really like it, except for some major dialogue issues. When I got to this particular comic, I got totally turned off, and have only now gone back to catch up on all the fantastic art. It just seems to me that you'll either have dialogue so vague it's irritating, or so blunt it's rather unpleasantly screaming in our faces. You need to write for your audience, not for your own seriously intelligent creative thought process or your writer's-block-stricken frustration. At least your spelling and grammar is decent. Just know, Ramon, that I say this with all kinds of love, and hope to get all caught up soon. I'm a real fan, I swear. I’m totally with shagbark on this one. I started reading this comic maybe almost a year ago now, and really like it, except for some major dialogue issues. When I got to this particular comic, I got totally turned off, and have only now gone back to catch up on all the fantastic art. It just seems to me that you’ll either have dialogue so vague it’s irritating, or so blunt it’s rather unpleasantly screaming in our faces. You need to write for your audience, not for your own seriously intelligent creative thought process or your writer’s-block-stricken frustration.

At least your spelling and grammar is decent.

Just know, Ramon, that I say this with all kinds of love, and hope to get all caught up soon. I’m a real fan, I swear.

]]> By: Cathy http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3499 Cathy Fri, 13 Feb 2009 04:50:39 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3499 I thought for a moment that there was a little blue birdy eye in the top corner of frame 3... I thought for a moment that there was a little blue birdy eye in the top corner of frame 3…

]]> By: Ramón http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3496 Ramón Sun, 21 Dec 2008 21:43:20 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3496 y'know the dialogue has always bothered me in this sequence as nadia is talking to herself... you may have a good point here shagbark. time to look at it in a different perspective when i collect the story... y’know the dialogue has always bothered me in this sequence as nadia is talking to herself… you may have a good point here shagbark. time to look at it in a different perspective when i collect the story…

]]> By: shagbark http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3495 shagbark Sun, 21 Dec 2008 19:17:52 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3495 Great art - words unnecessary in these 3 panels. Great art – words unnecessary in these 3 panels.

]]> By: Ramón http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3478 Ramón Wed, 05 Mar 2008 04:24:35 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3478 thanks eddie! thanks eddie!

]]> By: Eddie http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3477 Eddie Wed, 05 Mar 2008 03:36:42 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3477 Hey, just wanted to point out that on the front page it says "The story your about to read..." when it should say "the story you're about to read..." It's the second sentence of the intro. Love this comic and BNS, btw. The art and colors are spectacular! I can't wait to see what happens next. Hey, just wanted to point out that on the front page it says “The story your about to read…” when it should say “the story you’re about to read…” It’s the second sentence of the intro.

Love this comic and BNS, btw. The art and colors are spectacular! I can’t wait to see what happens next.

]]> By: ..::beep::.. http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3476 ..::beep::.. Wed, 05 Mar 2008 02:24:22 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3476 I'm with Karl, that was a pretty sweet twist. I’m with Karl, that was a pretty sweet twist.

]]> By: Joe http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3475 Joe Wed, 05 Mar 2008 00:33:15 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3475 Hey guys, Ramon, nice work so far. I hope you don't object, I've been taking some of my favourite frames/comics and turning them into wallpapers for my own amusement. If you're happy, I was thinking about putting them out for everyone who appreciates your work. I'd appreciate it if you got in touch with me. My email address is attatched with this post. Cheers Joe Hey guys,

Ramon, nice work so far. I hope you don’t object, I’ve been taking some of my favourite frames/comics and turning them into wallpapers for my own amusement. If you’re happy, I was thinking about putting them out for everyone who appreciates your work. I’d appreciate it if you got in touch with me. My email address is attatched with this post.

Cheers

Joe

]]> By: Chameleon http://www.kukuburi.com/v2/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/comment-page-1/#comment-3474 Chameleon Tue, 04 Mar 2008 21:53:58 +0000 http://www.kukuburi.com/2008/02/25/sixtyfour/#comment-3474 ewwwww... bugs.... really really BIG bugs *shiver* ick ;) I love this comic and can't wait to see how she gets out of this one ewwwww… bugs…. really really BIG bugs *shiver* ick

;) I love this comic and can’t wait to see how she gets out of this one

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